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Imagine me jumping off the cliff without looking down. That's what this feels like!

Imagine me jumping off the cliff without looking down. That’s what this feels like!

I’ve stolen the work of two people and combined them… This makes an outline I can follow to make a great book. Chris Andrews gave me the basic outline and Randy Ingermanson – “the Snowflake Guy” gave me the outline for each scene.

Below, I’ve given you the basics of this outline. You can see where I put in the sequences from Chris Andrews. Under each one, I’ve added the outline for a singe scene. Yes, my chapters will have more than one scene. This will help me to stay on track.

This is where your premise goes. It’s a 25 word sentence that tempts people to read the blurb or the book.
Set up Adventure Begins Things get worse Resolution
Sequence 1 Sequence Sequence Sequence
This is where you put the gist of the scene      
Scene Scene Scene Scene
Goal Goal Goal Goal
Conflict Conflict Conflict Conflict
Disaster Disaster Disaster Disaster
Sequel Sequel Sequel Sequel
Reaction Reaction Reaction Reaction
Dilemma Dilemma Dilemma Dilemma
Decision Decision Decision Decision
Sequence 2 Sequence Sequence Sequence
Scene Scene Scene Scene
Goal Goal Goal Goal
Conflict Conflict Conflict Conflict
Disaster Disaster Disaster Disaster
Sequel Sequel Sequel Sequel
Reaction Reaction Reaction Reaction
Dilemma Dilemma Dilemma Dilemma
Decision Decision Decision Decision
Sequence 3 Sequence Sequence Sequence
Scene Scene Scene Scene
Goal Goal Goal Goal
Conflict Conflict Conflict Conflict
Disaster Disaster Disaster Disaster
Sequel Sequel Sequel Sequel
Reaction Reaction Reaction Reaction
Dilemma Dilemma Dilemma Dilemma
Decision Decision Decision Decision

I hope I didn’t overstep any boundaries with anyone. I tried to give credit where credit was due. If I did overstep boundaries, please, let me know and I will do what I can to fix it! I don’t want to cause anyone any grief…

Let me know what you think of this, as I am unsure of where this will lead me. I hope it will lead me to an awesome book! I have a good start with Chris Andrew’s Easiest-Ever Guide to Story Outlining!

I think my scenes will be improved, big time, using Randy Ingermanson – “the Snowflake Guy”s scene outline.

With that being said, I’m still bringing you along the ride of writing this story, but I won’t be revealing everything here! Ha Ha Ha! Nice try, you!

Let me know what you think of this outline. Would it work for you or do you, already, have one that works great for you? What do you see wrong with my outline? I would love to hear what you have to say!

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This is Chris Andrews Image and I have no rights to it at all!

This is Chris Andrews Image and I have no rights to it at all!

Okay, here’s the update on my adventures with using The Easiest-Ever Guide to Outlining by Chris Andrews.  I have done the next part… I will continue this and keep you updated as I progress through it! I’m actually having a bit of fun doing this… I may have to use this from now on!

Telandria Moonbright, an elven sorceress, wants to raise a family, but her previous life as the leader of a famous group of dragon slayers has ramifications she is unaware of.

Set up

Adventure begins

Things get serious

Resolution

Sequence 1 How Telandria finds out dragons are not extinct

  • Telandria is meeting her boyfriend in front of her home, on her way there she is mugged by four thugs.

    • She uses her magic, but it doesn’t work on them.

  • Melnore jumps out of a carriage and takes on the muggers.

    • They normally would succumb to his physical strength and fear factor, but not these guys.

  • The muggers turn into dragons.

    • Melnore follows suit

  • The fight goes airborne

    • When the fight is over, Melnore lands in front of Telandria’s house

  • Telandria demands he change back into an elf

    • She slaps him and yells at him for lying to her all this time.

Sequence 3 Telandria learns a great deal about dragons while trying to recruit help in the war between dragons and humanoids

  • She learns there are a lot of dragons hiding among the population

    • She learns about them having to go into hiding because of dragon hunters

  • She learns there is a war between the dragons

    • Some are for humanoids and some are against humanoids

  • She learns of her past life

    • She learns she was part of the group responsible for killing the most dragons

  • She talks with her most trusted friends about the war

    • At first they don’t believe her

  • She recruits several people to help the dragons trying to protect humanoids

    • She asks Melmore, her boyfriend, to show them his true form

Sequence 5 A group of humanoid slayers kidnap Telandria

  • Telandria is organizing meetings for those willing to help in the war

    • She is often out late at night

  • A group of thugs try to mug her

    • Melnore hires guards for her

  • She moves in with her boyfriend

    • She has access to all that he has, except his basement

  • She becomes very curious about the basement

    • She goes to the basement when he isn’t home

    • She finds his horde

    • he catches her down there

    • She thought he had something interesting, like books down there

  • Frustrated she goes for a walk

    • She is kidnapped

    • Melnore can’t find her

    • A ransom note is delivered to Melnore

Sequence 7 Her boyfriend mus gather the recruits to rescue her

  • When the recruits arrive for the weekly meeting, Melnore tells him what happened

    • Half want to take the chance and pay the ransom

    • Half want to rescue her and keep their money

  • They decide to pay the ransom as a ruse for finding out where Telandria is being kept

  • Melnore takes the ransom in a carriage and walks away

    • There is a spell on the carriage that allows them to follow it an hour later

  • They follow the carriage

    • It’s outside of Oron

  • They rescue Telandria

    • Half their members die

    • They take possession of the house and treasure inside

Sequence 2 How Telandria meets the Dragon Queen

Sequence 4 Telandria escapes the Dragon Queen

Sequence 6 Telandria escapes Dragon Mountain

Sequence 8 Telandria kills the Dragon Queen

This is what my outline looks like right now, but I’m thinking I may need to add some stuff to the middle to make it more exciting… Anyway…

Have you used this outline? Why or why not? Wow! That sounded like a test question, didn’t it? Okay, so give me your thoughts on this outline and how my story is looking, please.

THERE ONCE LIVED A MAN

Posted: May 20, 2015 in Uncategorized

I like this poem and thought I would share it with you as a kind of “extra”.

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Many lifetimes ago there lived a youthful man,

He worked hard, he did all that a man can.

On his farm, awoke when the rooster said,

Watched the sunrise, breakfast began his day.

A simple man whom worked hard on his land,

Crops in the field, a little money in his hand.

He had a wife with a pretty smile,

She was there when the day was done,

As he walked in from the setting sun.

Supper on the table, tired was this man and wife,

A warm fire and some conversation till sleep set in their eyes.

Children were grown, an adventure of their own,

A mother, a father, in a home now alone,

There once was a man whom loved all that he had.

Keith Garrett

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What I said

I said that I would use this guide to outlining by Chris Andrews when I got an idea for a story. Well, I got an idea for a story. It was flimsy to say the least. I wanted to create a story where humanoid kind had to work with dragons to save the dragons and the worlds magic. That was the idea to start with…

This is Chris Andrews Image and I have no rights to it at all!

This is Chris Andrews Image and I have no rights to it at all!

What I did

I began to work it out the way I normally do, then I remembered I needed to outline because I’m working now and I may need to take a few days off from writing in order to work…

What I’ve done

Return of the Dragons Outline is what I’ve named the outline, maybe the book. Who knows! Right now, it’s just an idea I’m playing with. It may work out, it may not…

Who’s it about?

Telandria Moonbright, a female elven sorceress

What do they want?

Find a husband and raise some kids while working on her sorcery

Who or what is preventing them from getting it?

She is the reincarnation of the leader of the dragon slayers that forced the dragons to extinction

I wrote it in sentence form:

Telandria Moonbright, an elven sorceress, wants to raise a family with all her heart, but her previous life as the leader of a group of dragon slayers has ramifications she is just now learning about.

Telandria Moonbright, an elven sorceress, wants to raise a family, but her previous life as the leader of a famous group of dragon slayers has ramifications she is unaware of.

Set up

Adventure begins

Things get serious

Resolution

Sequence 1

Sequence 3

Sequence 5

Sequence 7

Sequence 2

Sequence 4

Sequence 6

Sequence 8

I don’t know about you, but I feel a bit silly at this point. How can you outline a story using sequences? Augh!

Telandria Moonbright, an elven sorceress, wants to raise a family, but her previous life as the leader of a famous group of dragon slayers has ramifications she is unaware of.

Set up

Adventure begins

Things get serious

Resolution

Sequence 1 How Telandria finds out dragons are not extinct

Sequence 3 Telandria learns a great deal about dragons while trying to recruit help

Sequence 5 A group of humanoid slayers kidnap Telandria

Sequence 7 Her boyfriend must gather the recruits to rescue her

Sequence 2 How Telandria meets the Dragon Queen

Sequence 4 Telandria escapes the Dragon Queen

Sequence 6 Telandria escapes Dragon Mountain

Sequence 8 Telandria kills the Dragon Queen

Okay, so maybe this will work…

That’s it for today. I have to get ready for work. I, also, have to take care of Momma before work, so I can work! lol

Yes, I still take care of my Momma. She continues to decline, but that is just they way of things with her diagnosis’. They don’t get better, they just keep getting worse.

I love to hear from ya’ll. Please, leave a comment or question or whatever below! Have you tried this outline? Do you have your own outline you use? What is it? Let’s chat!

Discoveries!

Posted: May 16, 2015 in Writing
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This is Chris Andrews Image and I have no rights to it at all!

This is Chris Andrews Image and I have no rights to it at all!

Before I start this post, I want to let you all know that I have some great stuff coming up! Oh! Yeah! I’ve got a new story I’m working on and you get to follow along! From idea, through part of the outline, the premise, and all the little tidbits I can share without giving it all away.

Shout out

First, I want to send a big shout out to Chris Andrews! He gave me an outline I can, not only understand, but I can follow it too!

Well, before you start thinking,’ Well, what’s the big deal about that?’ You should know I was a die hard pantser. A pantser is someone who starts writing the story without any idea of where it’s going. They learn along the way what’s going to happen.

This worked for me for many years, but, when my computer crashed, I lost the zest for writing. I know that sounds pretty “sensitive” of me. You have to understand, though. I lost one story nearly ready for publication, to novella’s is nearly ready for publication. This was a crushing blow, because it was all my fault. I was the idiot who did not back up my stuff. Let that be a lesson to you, make sure you backup everything you need.

A plotter, which is what I’ve become, is someone who plans their story out. This allows them to make changes to the story, where it doesn’t really make sense, before they write 12 pages on it. Yes, I have done this.

Past lives reborn

This is the working title of my new story. In order to find out more, you’ll have to keep following my blog. I know that was shameless advertising. But somebody’s gotta do it, right?

I would love to know what you think about this title, but be sure to give me feedback all throughout these blog posts. I’m counting on you to let me know when I’ve gone too far or if the story just sounds stupid.

Next

You will never guess what I, finally, got recently. Oh! I’m too excited about it for words! I have wanted this for over three years and, now, I finally have it. I would love to give him a shout out, but I don’t have permission to use his name. He knows who he is, though.

Are you ready for this? Okay, here goes! Nuance Dragon NaturallySpeaking Home edition software! Yes! That’s right! That’s right! I’m using it right now. I’ve used it every day since I got it. It is the most useful writing tool I’ve ever gotten. Not many of you know this about me, but I have carpal tunnel syndrome in both my wrists. I have to wear braces when they hurt too bad which makes it hard to write. This software has been a savior in that area of my life.

Finally

You remember at the beginning of this post, when I said I would take you long with the writing journey of the story? The first couple of blog posts have, not only been written, but they’ve been scheduled for posting. That means, even if I get distracted or forget, you will still get the information.

As a side note

Mama gave me quite a scare this week. Starting Monday, she had some severe breathing problems. Finally convinced her to go to the emergency room on Thursday. We found out it was just her COPD flaring up. They gave her some new meds, which kinda sucks, but she is doing so much better.

School is out for Sportschick and  cowboy! Sports chick is in softball, to keep her busy. Cowboy is in T-ball to keep him busy. However, we all understand this is not going to be enough to keep them happy all summer long. I would appreciate any suggestions you may have to entertain a teenager and a young boy. Bigboy has started a new job, at a tire shop. This is great news! Now he has the find someone to watch his kids while he works. No latchkey kids for him. As I said before, this is a new relationship and I’m not sure I’m ready to babysit his kids, yet. Don’t get me wrong, they’re great kids! Just not sure how good of a sitter I am.

Thank you for following me along on this journey and I hope to hear from you. Without any comments below, I wonder if anyone reads my posts. So even if you just type “I read this”, I would feel a whole lot better.

Facebook Friends

Posted: May 9, 2015 in Uncategorized

I think his suggestion is awesome! This would make things better on facebook!

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I would like to offer a quick suggestion to the administrators of facebook.When friend requests are posted on your home page the requirements to request any of these people is that you either know them personally or have one or more mutual friends among you.That was the explanation given to me and that is how I have proceeded.Just recently upon logging in,a notification appeared from the facebook support people listing several friend requests that I had submitted with no response at all.That’s ok with me you can’t expect every request to be excepted and new friends made.But I do not expect the facebook support people telling me that I have to know these people or have mutual friends with them.So I proceeded to delete the unresponsive requests-no problem.Here is my suggestion-when a request is posted on your page which you click on this should be valid for a specific amount…

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Posted: May 7, 2015 in Family
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Lately, I feel like the days have been moving past me at lightning speed

I don’t know if any of you know this already, but I’ve started learning how to be a copywriter. I’m learning through CopyBlogger. I’ve found it to be interesting and challenging. After all, I’m used to writing fantasy.

Momma has declined noticeably. She’s still, almost, the same as usual, but now she has trouble going anywhere at all. We used to be able to go places most of the time. Now, we stay home all but on the rare occasion.

We recently celebrated her 80th birthday and her seven years sobriety. I’m so proud of her!

Next week, I get to celebrate five months with my boyfriend! Yay!

Cowboy graduates today! Yay! Relax, he’s only graduating from one grade to another. At some point, I will remember what grades they are in….

Well, I’m going to go for now… I hope to catch up with ya’ll soon! Leave a comment or whatever below and I’ll get back to you!